The titles below have received full manuscript reads and second-pass editorial working copies. That is an editorial milestone, not a release declaration; artwork, final layout, rights checks, retailer metadata and rendered-file QA still have to clear before sale.
Book 01 — A Day at Paul Lake
Second-pass editorial copy22-page manuscriptNot for sale
A full Paul Lake day of boating, swimming, tubing and the pontoon slide, with teamwork, water safety and shared memories at the centre.
Editorial corrections completed for grammar, tense, wording and author-credit consistency.
Canadian spelling and the established ensemble cast preserved.
Release blockers remain: final art, cover, layout, rights, retailer metadata and rendered-file QA.
Book 02 — The Pontoon Slide Challenge
Second-pass editorial copy22-page manuscriptNot for sale
Remington and Maverick invent a funny, safe splash challenge without turning the day into a competition or taking reckless risks. The story heart is simple: creativity beats showing off.
Corrected the original tense/article defect in the dog-at-the-ladder scene.
Smoothed awkward challenge wording and standardized author-credit and illustration-direction style.
Release blockers remain: final art, cover, layout, rights, retailer metadata and rendered-file QA.
Book 03 — The Tubing Team
Second-pass editorial copy22-page manuscriptNot for sale
A tubing-day story about rider signals, turn-taking and clear communication so everybody can enjoy the adventure safely.
Corrected the original Page 11 tense defect and the mismatch between Jiving Jay’s joke and the following reference to the dog.
Replaced placeholder-like location wording with natural Paul Lake phrasing and standardized editorial style.
Release blockers remain: final art, cover, layout, rights, retailer metadata and rendered-file QA.
Book 04 — The Missing Paddle
Second-pass editorial copy22-page manuscriptNot for sale
A dock-and-shoreline search story about slowing down, looking carefully and working as a team when a paddle disappears before the afternoon outing.
Corrected the source’s malformed “child-friendly” text, missing articles and redundant outing wording.
Repaired the Page 11 tense/reference error and tightened Pages 6–16 so the search, discovery and resolution remain logically continuous.
Release blockers remain: final art, cover, layout, rights, retailer metadata, rendered-file QA and native-language QA for translated editions.
Book 05 — The Quiet Cove
Second-pass editorial copy22-page manuscriptNot for sale
A quiet-observation story at a sheltered Paul Lake cove, where slowing down and listening turns wildlife watching into its own kind of adventure.
Corrected missing articles, awkward objective wording and the Page 11 tense/reference mismatch between the loon call and the dog.
Tightened Pages 6–16 so lowering voices, listening and observing wildlife remain the continuous story arc while preserving the cast, setting and story heart.
Release blockers remain: final art, cover, layout, rights, retailer metadata, rendered-file QA and native-language QA for translated editions.